it has alot of potential try making it so that its easyer to read the subtitles maybe add a little battle music and sound effects and it would be alot better but besides that not bad keep up the good work
dont be afraid to ask for a lil help
next time you make somthing like this il join you in making some scenes if thats ok
that was great
rock on lil dude
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